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★ 2.0 average from 1 person · 1 entry
this article had lots of information but the writing of it is dubious. some links are slanted with no rhyme or reason, it includes information that should be a direct quote and not summorization, one sentence started with "Indeed,". some information, although it said it had a source, did not link to the source at the bottom. it repeated itself a bit as well, although i forgive it for that since it communicated it in different sections with different wordings. the article had a lot to discuss about the arapaima which i loved a lot, particularly because this is my favorite fish, but it just needs shaping. rewriting and formatting a little. one thing i like the amount of pictures. much better than the plant side of wikipedia. btw read about them, the way they can breath air and for small amounts of time be on the surface to eat things that come close to the water is killer